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  • µî·ÏÀÏ : 2022.05.16
  • Is giving better than receiving.


Everybody has Jealousy. Even though some think they are the kindest in the world, deep down everyone does have jealous and they could be really greedy. So I came up with this topic. Is giving better than receiving? Of course we all know that you should be much more caring and giving to others than what you receive from them. You can know that fact easily , because there are so many riddles and rhymes about those. But that's out of the topic. 


So, let me give an example. I've done a little test on my two friends recently I bought 3packages of candies that my two friends loved. But I didn't give the candies equally. Since there were 3 I gave one of my friends ( Let's call her A. ) 2 packages of candy. And for the other friend ( Let's call her B. ) I only gave one. But there's another clever trick. Even though A got the most candy, In her package there wasn't any candy, only some crumpled up paper to look like ther was something in the package. For B's package, there was real candy. Since they were given candies, I've asked A to share her one packaged candy into half so they could have a  equal amount. But without thought A said "NO" immediately. But B said" That's fine, I'll give you more of my candies if you want. " said B to A. And B shared hers. And then A opened her 2 packaged candies. But in her surprise there were only crumpled up paper. Finally, I've told A and B the truth of my secret trick. I've told B that I was so impressed about her good heart and mind. So for a reward I gave her 2more packages of candy. But for A I've  told her about the trick and about her mind about being greedy and not thinking of others.

From that day forward, I've never seen A being greedy or have jealousy of other kids' things. In total, we can say that she has learned a lesson to the benefit of being greedy.


After a month this happened, My two friends, A and B say my trick has taught them to be kind and never be greedy again, and be generous to others.  You might say that this comes to a final result that Giving is way much better than receiving.


In conclusion, I want you to try to give something to others. Or to a close friend. Not to anyone. It doesn't have to be a present, it could be good advice also, try this for a week or so, then you'll see that the more you give the more you receive in return.​

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