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In the world there are lots of admirabe,honorable people. And today I would like to tell you about my ¡®father¡¯. Okay, he is not a popular person, and worldwide people don¡¯t know about my father. But I chose to write my dad because I know my dad is a respectable person. So, today I am going to introduce and tell you about my father.

 

My dad tries hard to promote the house that he wants to sell,  he makes PPTs for presentations, and he also sells the house. He does lots of things to sell the good house to others. 

When my dad was 6 years old his dad passed away because of a car accident. So for my dad's mother it means my grandmother had to raise the two sons wihout husband and also she needed to work, so it was so hard to live.

To my dad there was nobody who told him to study or help him to choose his future. There were no adults who helped or adviced my dad. He was so jealous of his friends who had dads when he was young, his adolescence so he lost his way. But after he entered the army he started studying computers and he got a lot of certificates.

He wanted to be good at computer documenting, and data analysis. Instead of failing to go to college he worked hard on it alone and started a real estate job. He analyzes the commercial district, makes data, and presents meetings with the construction companies.

He is managing the staff who can sell the house. But nowadays the problem of interest rates is serious. Interest rates are rising, which has also hit the real estate sector hard, and my father is currently having a hard time working. If interest rates are rising it makes it hard for people to sell or buy a house and this makes it hard for my dad to sell the house.

So nowadays I can feel that he feels really tired and wants to get some rest. I really want to help him but I can¡¯t help his work so it makes me feel a little sorry and bad. After I noticed the reason that he was working hard I felt a little sad. He said, the reason that he works hard is to raise me well. He told my mother that he wants to become a dad who can live next to me for a long time and who can talk a lot. He wants to be a dad that he never felt before.

Don¡¯t you think my dad is a respectable and honorable person? I never had a really hard time like my father so It would be a lie if I say I can understand him 100%. But I know that he tried his best all the time and he is the best dad,and the best person I have ever seen.All the time I will thank him and I will also try my best at my life like my dad.

Thank you for reading my essay until the end.


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